What the Hell is Michael Jamin Talking About?

What the Hell is Michael Jamin Talking About?

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This Simple Fix Can Make Your Pilot Script Soar

Advice from a TV writer/showrunner

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Michael Jamin
Jul 30, 2026
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Once a week, I host a group consulting session for emerging writers. I hear their ideas and give guidance.

The beauty of doing these sessions is that hearing their struggles provides me with new topics for Substack content. Last week in particular provided me with an incredibly helpful subject, that, up until now, hadn’t occurred to me to talk about.

The writer was pitching their idea for a cop movie. The hero was a detective and he had a foil who was trying to undermine him. The problem was that this foil worked in a completely different department.

I suggested making him his partner. This would make the story not just easier to write, but also more compelling. How?

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