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What the Hell is Michael Jamin Talking About?

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Do you understand the difference between "direct dialogue" and "indirect dialogue?"
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Do you understand the difference between "direct dialogue" and "indirect dialogue?"

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Michael Jamin
May 08, 2025
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When it comes to quality, the difference between bad writing and good writing often doesn’t come down to plot, characters, or even story structure.

In fact, many horrible movies are very similar to great movies in those regards. So what differentiates them?

Very often it comes down to the dialogue — specifically whether the dialogue is written directly or indirectly.

What’s the difference?

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Guess which one your dialogue should be

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